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In Senior Two , I became mature. At that time , I love a girl in my class . She is in a common figure and nothing special .The moment I saw her during the Opening ceremony,I thought I loved her at first sight. I didnot know whether I should love her . Because I was so shy a boy that I never contacted any girls even making friends with them. You know "LOVE" is a magical thing , when you own it ,you will be not under control. I wanted to show my love to her every day, but my shyness dicouraged me to do that . So I suffered much every day. At last ,my sense prevailed against my emotion . I knew work must come first , I wanted to nip it in the bud . It is a painful period when I felt I would die. Everything will pass away ,nowadays I will attend university , she will go to her college . Let's part our ways and I will think fondly of the days we stayed together forever .

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	g.c.dr.	鲜花 +1	puppy love	2008-09-04
	会飞的企鹅	鲜花 +2		2008-09-04

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My painful suffering,but sweet memory!

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引用第2楼会飞的企鹅于2008-09-04 14:39发表的 :写的不错。支持原创英语写作

hi buddy,we should speak in english here

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I think it's not a perfect article .Because I have a lot of unknow vocabularies , I cannot write a perfect article , I just write down my feelings. Thanks for reading .

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attention to your spel ..

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引用第4楼乖宝宝于2008-09-04 15:27发表的 :I think it's not a perfect article .Because I have a lot of unknow vocabularies , I cannot write a perfect article , I just write down my feelings. Thanks for reading . [表情]

nothing, good enough up to present
but you should pay attention to your spelling mistake.
eg. unknown